A little while ago I mentioned that I was preparing a book pitch and the first 5000 words of a creative non-fiction text. Today that draft was due.
7681 words, way too many hours of reading, and one mad scramble later, I’ve submitted it for my first round of formal feedback. But I felt I’d be remiss not to ask for your feedback too.
This is a link to the first draft. I have my own thoughts about what I like and what I think needs to change, but I don’t want to influence your read.
If you have the time and the inclination, I’d love to hear any thoughts you might have.
You can reach me via any of the usual means, but here is a link to an anonymous feedback form which you can use if you’d prefer.